Sunday, December 16, 2012

Fate's Wish

Fate’s Wish

Milly Taiden

Etopia Press

The man she loves left her, but he’s the only one that can protect her. Sharmila is a witch with a problem. Her magic is waning. And her lack of sex may have something to do with it. Her mother’s solution? Easy. Sharmila needs to get laid. Easier said than done, though, because Shar is still in love with the only man to make her melt, Zahir Darkwrath. Her missing husband. Her demon. Zahir knows he’s a danger to Shar, so he’s done his best to stay far away. Darkness flows through his being, and when emotions run wild, destruction rages around him. And sex with Shar is definitely wild. Staying away from the woman he loves is the hardest thing he’s ever done, but hurting her would be far worse. So he’s astounded when Shar’s mother hires his company to watch over her. Evil is heading Shar’s way, and Zahir is the only one who can stop it. To save her, Zahir will need more than control; he’ll need the power of his own darkness--which might be his undoing.

1 comment:

  1. So much is packed into this blurb!

    The first line sounds more like a log line and kinda outta place, IMO. Starting with the second line is more of a hook. (Again, IMO.) The single word sentence *Easy.* (Please note, I love one word sentences!) takes the impact away from *Sharmila needs to get laid.* (And who wouldn't want such a sympathetic mom?)

    The last bit of free advice (and you get what you pay for) is to maybe break this blurb into paragraphs. Reading one big, blocky book description can be a turn-off to some.

    All this said, I'll be looking to download this book. I'm not a avid fan of paranormal, but the obvious conflict between Sharmila and Zahir is too much for me to resist! :)