tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8544552085950683101.post8597796431376801218..comments2023-04-28T04:16:08.944-07:00Comments on The Book's Blurb Blog: Fate's WishLynn Crainhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17563978872099232823noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8544552085950683101.post-1037645615437807442012-12-16T12:51:20.832-08:002012-12-16T12:51:20.832-08:00So much is packed into this blurb!
The first lin...So much is packed into this blurb! <br /><br />The first line sounds more like a log line and kinda outta place, IMO. Starting with the second line is more of a hook. (Again, IMO.) The single word sentence *Easy.* (Please note, I love one word sentences!) takes the impact away from *Sharmila needs to get laid.* (And who wouldn't want such a sympathetic mom?) <br /><br />The last bit of free advice (and you get what you pay for) is to maybe break this blurb into paragraphs. Reading one big, blocky book description can be a turn-off to some.<br /><br />All this said, I'll be looking to download this book. I'm not a avid fan of paranormal, but the obvious conflict between Sharmila and Zahir is too much for me to resist! :)Lynda Baileyhttp://www.lyndabailey.netnoreply@blogger.com